I appreciate the compliments. This was new territory for me, so I am glad it went well. In fact, a few folks have voiced a desire to know more about this world/story, and though I never even looked at it from that perspective, those suggestions, coupled with today's prompt, might lead me to revisit the Unbundu Delta. Maybe an origin story?
There you go! Yeah, you planted some really interesting seeds here from a world-building perspective, so it's not surprising that people want to learn more. An origin story would be very interesting!
Woah this was amazing. Etched in world building and pouring with aesthetic. For me, and I believe because I only wrote something similar in idea but rather with a voice! I sensed that she had shot herself. Which lends itself to even more depth than originally present. I loved it overall. You have cooked amazingly here.
Thank you! And it's funny, I never thought of this as a piece of a larger work, and I am a total greenhorn at fantasy, but it might be fun. AND this might play right into Bradley's prompt for today. ;)
Loved the subtle worldbuilding throughout this piece! The horror elements were superb as well, and I really enjoyed the chilling conclusion!
I appreciate the compliments. This was new territory for me, so I am glad it went well. In fact, a few folks have voiced a desire to know more about this world/story, and though I never even looked at it from that perspective, those suggestions, coupled with today's prompt, might lead me to revisit the Unbundu Delta. Maybe an origin story?
There you go! Yeah, you planted some really interesting seeds here from a world-building perspective, so it's not surprising that people want to learn more. An origin story would be very interesting!
Woah this was amazing. Etched in world building and pouring with aesthetic. For me, and I believe because I only wrote something similar in idea but rather with a voice! I sensed that she had shot herself. Which lends itself to even more depth than originally present. I loved it overall. You have cooked amazingly here.
Thank you so much! I appreciate the thoughtful feedback, especially for a piece that was new territory for me. Thank you.
I really liked this one! Very suspenseful!
Thank you!!!
Chilling! I am so curious about this world and what the shadow will do next!
Thank you! And it's funny, I never thought of this as a piece of a larger work, and I am a total greenhorn at fantasy, but it might be fun. AND this might play right into Bradley's prompt for today. ;)
Sounds like fate to me!