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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Loved the subtle worldbuilding throughout this piece! The horror elements were superb as well, and I really enjoyed the chilling conclusion!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Woah this was amazing. Etched in world building and pouring with aesthetic. For me, and I believe because I only wrote something similar in idea but rather with a voice! I sensed that she had shot herself. Which lends itself to even more depth than originally present. I loved it overall. You have cooked amazingly here.

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