This was excellent! Love how much character development you achieved in a short story like this. The ending was also very well-written and deeply satisfying. Awesome work!
I appreciate you saying that! This story was picked as one of the five for my podcast episode, by the way, so I'll tag you when the new episode drops later this evening (East Coast time)!
Thanks! I have been wanting to use those dang gloves in a story for several months. I knew there had to be one in them. Haha! Maybe it's a series starter, something different happens to each person that buys those gloves? Or maybe not. lol!
Excellent atmosphere you created here. I really loved the way you built tension within her thoughts and thoughts of the glove itself. Very unique idea and the news report was definitely a jaw drop moment in which you reveal what she did and how gruesome it was. Amazing subtlety and your writing invokes me asking the question all throughout of whether or not she means to do it.
Well man, that’s some Pasa-get down-dena stuff right there! 🙈 Loved it!
Thank you, sir! It's gotta be the water! 🤣
Loved this!
Very nice, perfect for the theme
Thank you so much!
very well written you nailed the atmosphere and emotions
Thanks for the feedback! If you are interested, this story is going to be aired on The Red Treehouse Podcast tomorrow. Give it a listen if you can. 🤘
Loved this one! I particularly enjoyed the way you painted scenery in this one. :)
Thank you! I appreciate the input, and the kind words. :)
"Smiling seems the thing to do." Nice!
Even in that moment you can still feel her trauma cling, so much so that she can't even conjure a genuine smile of happiness or relief. Chilling!
Thanks! I'm glad you extracted that from that line, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
This was excellent! Love how much character development you achieved in a short story like this. The ending was also very well-written and deeply satisfying. Awesome work!
Thank you so much! I appreciate your input, and all you do to bolster this community. Keep up the awesome work.
I appreciate you saying that! This story was picked as one of the five for my podcast episode, by the way, so I'll tag you when the new episode drops later this evening (East Coast time)!
Great read! Love the idea of gaining her power through the gloves.
Thanks! I have been wanting to use those dang gloves in a story for several months. I knew there had to be one in them. Haha! Maybe it's a series starter, something different happens to each person that buys those gloves? Or maybe not. lol!
I'd read it! Love supernatural/conspiracy stuff. You could have lots of fun with that!
Excellent atmosphere you created here. I really loved the way you built tension within her thoughts and thoughts of the glove itself. Very unique idea and the news report was definitely a jaw drop moment in which you reveal what she did and how gruesome it was. Amazing subtlety and your writing invokes me asking the question all throughout of whether or not she means to do it.
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments, and I am so happy you enjoyed the story.